Burn – Part 6

INT. THE ROOM – TIME UNKOWN

We watch Frank’s reaction to the beating we hear Mickey is taking. We see the conflict. We see the horror. We see that Mickey means something to this man. But his brother…is his brother.

Slowly as we pull out still focused on Frank WE HEAR Johnny tiring and slowing down.

FRANK
Johnny?

Johnny swings again.

FRANK (CONT’D)
(Shouting)
JOHNNY!

Johnny stops and we now cut to another angle that shows Johnny exhausted and bloody standing over an almost broken Mickey. Mickey looks up at Johnny and Smiles again.

Johnny punches him so hard Mickey is knocked clean off the chair onto his side. On the floor he sees his zippo. Gleaming in the light.

Johnny picks up Mickey but the man is all but unconscious.

FRANK (CONT’D)
Enough!
JOHNNY
I TELL YOU WHAT’S ENOUGH YOU UNDERSTAND!

Still holding Mickey half up and staring dead at Frank, he releases his grip and let’s his victim fall back to the floor.

Mickey cracks his head and is out.

Franks blood still up and rides the adrenaline – a junky to violence.

JOHNNY
Why don’t you have a crack? You’ll feel better.
FRANK
Get fucked.

Johnny stops and squares up to his little brother.

FRANK (CONT’D)
And what? Me next? You’ve fucking lost it. You need to fucking relax and take a fucking breath.

The is a long pause as Johnny thinks about it.

JOHNNY
Yeah maybe you’re right.
FRANK
Maybe?
JOHNNY
Maybe.

Johnny laughs and rests a bloody hand on Franks shoulder.

FRANK
This is some fucked up shit Johnny. Everything’s turned on it’s head.
JOHNNY
Maybe. But this is an opportunity. We play this right it’s all ours.
FRANK
What the fuck are you talking about? It’s over.
JOHNNY
It’s not over. The field is open Frankie. Mickey ain’t holding out much longer. He’ll give up the girl.
FRANK
And then what?
LUCIA
(out of nowhere)
Ssh, Don’t ruin the surprise.

Lucia ,The Redhead is now standing in the doorway of room revealing steps up. She is shrouded in darkness but her bright red hair shines.

Frank’s face is a mixture of fear. She looks out from the gloom her deep blue eyes glow unnaturally. She’s wet, like she’s just stepped out of a bath but that’s not quite it…

LUCIA
The girl is mine Frank. Remember the deal we made.

I made no deal.

Lucia walks out of the darkness naked covered from head to toe in fresh blood – her bright blue eyes pierce the crimson mask.

She gently strolls towards the brothers. Johnny under her spell like a school crushed teenager. Frank visibly horrified.

At the brothers she stops.

She takes Johnny’s hand and without breaking her stare at Frank plunges the big mans hands between her legs. She continues stares at Frank as Johnny plays with her and kisses her neck.

Frank backs away but she keeps staring.

Frank  made a deal alright.

And now he’s paying for it.

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